People drink way too much in England.

I know this very well. My school had two student bars. Then again, smoking and drinking are kind of the thing there.

The lack of tea in the first paragraph puts me off. It's England, lady ;P! /I kid

They’re given tea to accompany their meal instead; it’s just a little weird...

Why so surprised? It's England! Booze or tea. You live and learn.

Cameron sighs, leaning back against his pillows and scratching his nails across his stomach.

Can he do this in slow motion?

Tyler is laughing and his Adam’s apple is bobbing and Cameron is trying really hard not to watch the smooth contraction of muscle in Tyler’s throat

I really liked this description.

... two hundred pounds...

He made it clear it was two-twenty!

Heh. Tomorrow night. This leaves me wanting more! Thank you so much for writing it.