Hi, great start, I really liked it, it's pretty daunting isn;t it? I just wrote & posted my 1st fic here on LJ last week, I felt sick lol, but hey people liked it, if not they don;t have to read it.

Good luck with your fic writing, most people want a sequel from me, BUT I have my reservations on that lol,,later Sexy P.x

BTW BK could never resist him, it was his only weakness :)