I FOUND THE STORY IS KINDA UNIQUE, AND I ALSO LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE.YOU KNOW, I'VE READ MANY STORIES AND REALLY LOVE TO SEE SOME STORY LIKE THIS JUST SILENTLY STAND OUT AND SIMPLY CATCH YOUR MIND WITH THE DESCRIPTION.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT I GONNA SAY ABOUT THIS, I GUESS, MAYBE IT'S LIKE YOUR OWN FREUD EXPLANATION FOR MICHAEL'S INNER THOUGHTS(I LOVE THE ENDING,IT ROCKS), JUST LIKE WATCHING A INDIE MOVIE, FRAGMENTS MAKE UP ITS CONTENT.HOWEVER, I THINK YOU ARE A WRITER HAVE GREAT POTENTIAL,REALLY, YOU DESERVE MORE INSIGHTFUL REVIEWS....